Protagonist of Ottawa Story
Jan. 27th, 2007 05:00 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
mastergraywolfStill working on details.
It is our French hero Bernadine.
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The Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test
After doing the test, here is my summary:
"Claude should be somewhere around 13-21 years of age? Claude is male, unlike me; same is said for ethnicity (he is French). Very beautiful? Never thought of that, so no? He is not physically fit. Most authors don’t emphasize on appearance, so I won’t. WTF at questions 10 and 12; Claude will have dark brown hair, eyes are blue? Not unusual right? Difficult to answer the questions about the scars. I need to look up more on 17th century clothing, but it’s definitely not what question 16 had listed. He might have a little problem with authority, especially after meeting the Gargs. Openly defiant? Maybe occasionally.
28 sounds strange to me – maybe it’s defining something else with "unconventional tactics"? Why are UCT bad? 37? Maybe some type of bizarre advice like, “you know the best way to shine an apple?" 40 can’t work cause Clause is not complementary. The rest of the questions gets ridiculous, and avoided because of the story’s set timeline.
Maybe I’ll give him a phobia of snakes".
Name: Claude-Cecilia Bernardine
Titles/Other Names: Monsieur Claude Bernardine or Monsieur Bernardine
Named after: Parent, who enjoyed art and casual hobbies; last name is from death date of Saint.
B-DAY: May 20
Gender: Male
Approx Age: 13-21
Type: Protagonist
Personality Traits: ??
Likes: Apples (Shining apples)
Dislikes: ?
Good Habs:
Bad Habs/Quirks: ?
Friends: Christopher, Gregory, Jean
Misc. Details:
- A wise man, but Because of birthdate, he is [assumed/taunted?] seen as a rebellious hooligan.
Still working on it
It is our French hero Bernadine.
.
The Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test
After doing the test, here is my summary:
"Claude should be somewhere around 13-21 years of age? Claude is male, unlike me; same is said for ethnicity (he is French). Very beautiful? Never thought of that, so no? He is not physically fit. Most authors don’t emphasize on appearance, so I won’t. WTF at questions 10 and 12; Claude will have dark brown hair, eyes are blue? Not unusual right? Difficult to answer the questions about the scars. I need to look up more on 17th century clothing, but it’s definitely not what question 16 had listed. He might have a little problem with authority, especially after meeting the Gargs. Openly defiant? Maybe occasionally.
28 sounds strange to me – maybe it’s defining something else with "unconventional tactics"? Why are UCT bad? 37? Maybe some type of bizarre advice like, “you know the best way to shine an apple?" 40 can’t work cause Clause is not complementary. The rest of the questions gets ridiculous, and avoided because of the story’s set timeline.
Maybe I’ll give him a phobia of snakes".
Name: Claude-Cecilia Bernardine
Titles/Other Names: Monsieur Claude Bernardine or Monsieur Bernardine
Named after: Parent, who enjoyed art and casual hobbies; last name is from death date of Saint.
B-DAY: May 20
Gender: Male
Approx Age: 13-21
Type: Protagonist
Personality Traits: ??
Likes: Apples (Shining apples)
Dislikes: ?
Good Habs:
Bad Habs/Quirks: ?
Friends: Christopher, Gregory, Jean
Misc. Details:
- A wise man, but Because of birthdate, he is [assumed/taunted?] seen as a rebellious hooligan.
Still working on it
