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Mission FAIL
Aug. 21st, 2010 10:55 amPreparations for trip are taking longer than I thought.
As for the next SolAka chapter, it looks like I couldn't make it. I MADE IT JUST AROUND THE END, but I couldn't proofread. I'm also not that confident in writing combat scenes so I would definitely have to look over it plenty of times to see if I'm satisfied with all of the material. Many times I had to replace/edit countless sentences; the last thing I need to do is type it in a way so confusing that it won't be much of an entertaining read.
"What's happening?" "Why is it so repetitive?" There's also the transition or switching between the names of Yami (female General) and Yamikyo (the mech) throughout the chapter.
Also, if I had stayed up any longer I would've regretted it.
If anyone is curious, the chapter is over three thousand (3000!) words long. That is way past my preference. I don't want to shorten it though because it looks really good.
So until next week I'll leave you with a chapter title and am outline:
( Next time on SÅretsu Kaen SOLAKA )
Sorry, and see you.
When I get back and upload this, I'm going to edit my wiki and I'm going to return to HoGW
As for the next SolAka chapter, it looks like I couldn't make it. I MADE IT JUST AROUND THE END, but I couldn't proofread. I'm also not that confident in writing combat scenes so I would definitely have to look over it plenty of times to see if I'm satisfied with all of the material. Many times I had to replace/edit countless sentences; the last thing I need to do is type it in a way so confusing that it won't be much of an entertaining read.
"What's happening?" "Why is it so repetitive?" There's also the transition or switching between the names of Yami (female General) and Yamikyo (the mech) throughout the chapter.
Also, if I had stayed up any longer I would've regretted it.
If anyone is curious, the chapter is over three thousand (3000!) words long. That is way past my preference. I don't want to shorten it though because it looks really good.
So until next week I'll leave you with a chapter title and am outline:
( Next time on SÅretsu Kaen SOLAKA )
Sorry, and see you.
When I get back and upload this, I'm going to edit my wiki and I'm going to return to HoGW
