Fightin' time & Feelings
Jun. 16th, 2009 02:15 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
mastergraywolfI think I am developing some writer's block or I have been getting tired, but I did make progress in SolAka and the new HoGW. I was really determined to get to the fight scenes ASAP so I will start working on that soon.
I totally hate to admit it but Seishin is making me feel iffy. I have a problem with pace and making things connect.
Here's some more development notes. Remember, they are susceptible to being changed. Highlight to read:
Air Force Fiction - Beginning Stages
I still don't have a title.
- Character names: Claire Keighley, Aiden Christie.
- Bad Guys: The KDK or the Narodnaya Kryla (Народная кры́лья) is a group that supports secret-society led terrorism to put pressure on the western goverments. SO that's my current idea. One of the members is 37-year old Aleskey Evgeniovich Rodokov (simplified to Alex Rodokov). He is associated with Claire somehow.
- Squadron and Base: Takes place in US Air Force. The story centers on the USAF 563rd F-I Squadron and their anti-terror missions and training.
- "Alex": Aleskey's name in Russian is Алексей Евгений ович родоков
End
Howl of Gray Wolf (1 - 5 chap)
- Enemy: The first enemy we meet is Jesvah, the dragon. It is a purebreed. In the original version, Jesvah was confronted by Gray Wolf and Tiger after his dinos (?) killed their pack. In the new version, Jesvah had met Gray Wolf in the past and was defeated by him. Also, Jesvah was named Jespah. I like the name change; apparently it is a style of coffee? ;)
- Gray Wolf's pack: Like in older version, I do plan on getting them killed. It is the reason for Gray's revenge path and taking Tiger with him. Gray is driven by revenge
- Way later in the series, ally: I'd like to introduce a new ally to the rebels..which is a Zan from a Chimeia Tribe (χημεία φύλα).
End
SolAka [ 1 - 5 chap ]
- Jyou Matsumoto: What Jyou found in Yuuko's bag is connected to SolAka. It is actually a medallion used to summon the mech and bond with its Soul Beast Gem. It's like a key so SolAka won't fall into the wrong hands.
- Shirei's Four: I thought of the names of the four current pilots: Soratoga Hiori who is the only girl, Seiji Ryouya the Third, Katageru Genyuki and Kouyuurei Toramaru. The names of the latter 2 kind of bother me. Maybe I'll change themor just make Gneyuuki "Gen"
- The Invasion: Emperor Yang has Four Generals: Yami, Indra, Aditi and Aryman. All four attack Earth; SolAka's first challenge is with Yami in Japan
- Enemy special ability: Generals Aryaman and Aditi may not pilot man-made mechs but have an interesting transformation ability instead?
- SolAka Armaments: The Sekishinken (赤芯剣) from the "Song lyrics" means Red Soul Sword. The blade materializes from a fighter jet (HHJet-5 Seki), that has a built in sword grip that extends; swinging wings make the horn-shaped guard. You'll see..it will also have special attacks.
End
Seishin
- The Mystery: Someone is hunting down the Iga Council "Iga So koku Ikki" and Shoutaro's father seemed to be have been a victim.
- Youths: Iga vs Koga: Rivalry between Shoutaro and Kyoushirou has yet to be figured out
- Kyoushiro: The deaths of Kyoushiro's parents are still a mystery to me. And the reason why the Kousaka hates the Iga may have been from the past before Kamakura era.
- Sogabe: Sogabe may have been from a trecherous retainer family of Taira descent, but adopted into Iga
End
I totally hate to admit it but Seishin is making me feel iffy. I have a problem with pace and making things connect.
Here's some more development notes. Remember, they are susceptible to being changed. Highlight to read:
Air Force Fiction - Beginning Stages
I still don't have a title.
- Character names: Claire Keighley, Aiden Christie.
- Bad Guys: The KDK or the Narodnaya Kryla (Народная кры́лья) is a group that supports secret-society led terrorism to put pressure on the western goverments. SO that's my current idea. One of the members is 37-year old Aleskey Evgeniovich Rodokov (simplified to Alex Rodokov). He is associated with Claire somehow.
- Squadron and Base: Takes place in US Air Force. The story centers on the USAF 563rd F-I Squadron and their anti-terror missions and training.
- "Alex": Aleskey's name in Russian is Алексей Евгений ович родоков
End
Howl of Gray Wolf (1 - 5 chap)
- Enemy: The first enemy we meet is Jesvah, the dragon. It is a purebreed. In the original version, Jesvah was confronted by Gray Wolf and Tiger after his dinos (?) killed their pack. In the new version, Jesvah had met Gray Wolf in the past and was defeated by him. Also, Jesvah was named Jespah. I like the name change; apparently it is a style of coffee? ;)
- Gray Wolf's pack: Like in older version, I do plan on getting them killed. It is the reason for Gray's revenge path and taking Tiger with him. Gray is driven by revenge
- Way later in the series, ally: I'd like to introduce a new ally to the rebels..which is a Zan from a Chimeia Tribe (χημεία φύλα).
End
SolAka [ 1 - 5 chap ]
- Jyou Matsumoto: What Jyou found in Yuuko's bag is connected to SolAka. It is actually a medallion used to summon the mech and bond with its Soul Beast Gem. It's like a key so SolAka won't fall into the wrong hands.
- Shirei's Four: I thought of the names of the four current pilots: Soratoga Hiori who is the only girl, Seiji Ryouya the Third, Katageru Genyuki and Kouyuurei Toramaru. The names of the latter 2 kind of bother me. Maybe I'll change them
- The Invasion: Emperor Yang has Four Generals: Yami, Indra, Aditi and Aryman. All four attack Earth; SolAka's first challenge is with Yami in Japan
- Enemy special ability: Generals Aryaman and Aditi may not pilot man-made mechs but have an interesting transformation ability instead?
- SolAka Armaments: The Sekishinken (赤芯剣) from the "Song lyrics" means Red Soul Sword. The blade materializes from a fighter jet (HHJet-5 Seki), that has a built in sword grip that extends; swinging wings make the horn-shaped guard. You'll see..it will also have special attacks.
End
Seishin
- The Mystery: Someone is hunting down the Iga Council "Iga So koku Ikki" and Shoutaro's father seemed to be have been a victim.
- Youths: Iga vs Koga: Rivalry between Shoutaro and Kyoushirou has yet to be figured out
- Kyoushiro: The deaths of Kyoushiro's parents are still a mystery to me. And the reason why the Kousaka hates the Iga may have been from the past before Kamakura era.
- Sogabe: Sogabe may have been from a trecherous retainer family of Taira descent, but adopted into Iga
End
