Sample of Ninja chronicle & TOF 14.
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mastergraywolfI finally started writing the Prologue. Still stumped on a name.
Just a little taste:
Year 1567, daybreak
Tsugemachi area, Northern Iga
Vis-a-Vis
From the aftermath, he re-experiences the age old vendetta through the pain in his body.
|| Prologue ||
Countless seconds have passed since he last saw a young boy panicked with fear. Overcome with a sense of urgency, he leapt in between his friend and danger. Something impinged the brave man’s backside, and the image of his friend became naught. There was only silence and darkness, drawn out darkness; lying still, this time it would be highly reckoned that he has wend from the world.
===
If you're wondering about the bold text:
- 1st & 2nd: obvious, where and when the scene is taking place.
- 3rd: Italic text. THIS MIGHT be the title but thinking about it. At first, I wanted it to be some "important word", like about virtue (purity, loyalty, brotherhood, wisdom) or a sin, something on Taoism, or some word that describes a lesson that you "should" learn while reading.
- 4th: Dramatic sub-text. I have been adding this in lately and they will usually surround an individual and may quote them. SPOILER (?) HIGHLIGHT: In this case, it is Shoutarou. He is in a battle with Iga's neighbor, the other major ninja family the Kouga. His squad is near slaughtered by the infamous "Iga Mountain Oni (demon)", and near death, his mother saves him. Shou's rival is there as well.
Oh, by the way, two new commonly misspelled/misspelt words:
1.) Deity = / = Diety (Die-ty)
2.) Missile = / = Missle
Here's another sub-text, and it's from Tiger of Freedom Chapter 14!
"Those words 'I’ve never seen him before' confuses the hero group; despite the enemy having the same countenance, the same cheery disposition, the same body, as their friend Mocchi. No matter what, he is an enemy standing in the way. Tiger will exert all his willpower to see through Gawain’s aloof mask and defeat him."
Just a little taste:
Year 1567, daybreak
Tsugemachi area, Northern Iga
Vis-a-Vis
From the aftermath, he re-experiences the age old vendetta through the pain in his body.
|| Prologue ||
Countless seconds have passed since he last saw a young boy panicked with fear. Overcome with a sense of urgency, he leapt in between his friend and danger. Something impinged the brave man’s backside, and the image of his friend became naught. There was only silence and darkness, drawn out darkness; lying still, this time it would be highly reckoned that he has wend from the world.
===
If you're wondering about the bold text:
- 1st & 2nd: obvious, where and when the scene is taking place.
- 3rd: Italic text. THIS MIGHT be the title but thinking about it. At first, I wanted it to be some "important word", like about virtue (purity, loyalty, brotherhood, wisdom) or a sin, something on Taoism, or some word that describes a lesson that you "should" learn while reading.
- 4th: Dramatic sub-text. I have been adding this in lately and they will usually surround an individual and may quote them. SPOILER (?) HIGHLIGHT: In this case, it is Shoutarou. He is in a battle with Iga's neighbor, the other major ninja family the Kouga. His squad is near slaughtered by the infamous "Iga Mountain Oni (demon)", and near death, his mother saves him. Shou's rival is there as well.
Oh, by the way, two new commonly misspelled/misspelt words:
1.) Deity = / = Diety (Die-ty)
2.) Missile = / = Missle
Here's another sub-text, and it's from Tiger of Freedom Chapter 14!
"Those words 'I’ve never seen him before' confuses the hero group; despite the enemy having the same countenance, the same cheery disposition, the same body, as their friend Mocchi. No matter what, he is an enemy standing in the way. Tiger will exert all his willpower to see through Gawain’s aloof mask and defeat him."
