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mastergraywolfSEPT 19
I wonder if I should take some time to meditate on how to write and organize better. Go on a hiatus and primarily focus on reading other works and various tips on literature so I can be more confident. So what's on my mind? I've gotten this far, but what is bothering me? I'll ATTEMPT to rant later. Uh-oh, rant. That can't be good. That means it will be difficult to understand.
Here's some more development notes. Remember, they are susceptible to being changed and there are typo/grammar errors present since I was in a hurry. Highlight to read:
PokéFighters Remake - Beginning Stages
- Katakana: ポケ ファイターズ
- Heroes: Pikachu and Pichu, Charizard, Gengar, Ivysaur, Golduck
- Rivals: Scyther, Hitmonchan, Hitmonlee, Aerodactyl
- Enemies: Aerodactyl, Team Rocket, Yuutarou & Tokuwaru Family
- Naming:Pokemon and humans will have various names. In the English, I think the characters have both eastern and western types.
- About New enemy Name Tokuwaru is from "legend" (説, toku) and tsutawaru (伝わる), meaning summon. These guys may summon the Legendary Birds and one of the strongest PKMN trainer families.
- Regions: Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, majority of the story will take place in Kanto-Johto joint regions.
- Demographics??: There may be far more pokemon than humans? And there's no longer human gyms?
End
Howl of Gray Wolf
After a freakin month or two I, again, take a long time just to get a single chapter done.
- Nigrum and Niger: Both means "black", but Nigrum sounded better ;) and refers to dark nature being spread when sins are commited or when there's negative influence like death. It is needed to resurrect Moo.
- Enemy: So we meet Jesvah the dragon, and the next chapter will be a fight against him.
- Gray Wolf's pack: Like in older version, I do plan on getting them killed; but unlike the older version, it may not happen in as a single chapter
- The Islands: The Chimeia (χημεία φύλα) lives here. If I recall from notes, a magician or alchemist tribe?
End
SolAka
- Situation of Shirei: Shirei Kingdoms are under the control of the Deva Dynasty. After a large battle, the heirs of the kingdom families escaped along with others and the SUJ units
- Official Shirei's Four: Here are the Four SUJ pilots, family names first:
Soratora Hiori (空途駕 火折) : Phoenix
Gentekki Igiyuki (玄哲気 威儀幸) : Tortosie
Yuutsukasa Torahiko (勇士 児彦) : White Tiger
Seiji Ryoya The 3rd (青史 竜矢3世) : Dragon
- The Invasion fights: Yami vs Hiori will be first, in Tokyo Japan. Then it'll be Indra vs Torahiko + (later) Hiori
- SUJ meaning: SUj is a machine designation, meaning Shirei Ue Jyujin. It stands for Shirei Superiro Beast God, referring to the four Beast mecha. One of them is SolAka.
- More SolAka Armaments: SolAka's wings have bendable alloy to give it a realistic effect when the mecha's in flight. The only idea I could think of to attach the wings was to make it like an "attachment pack". This makes it a little heavier, but making SolAka an effective and symbolic mecha was the motiv for the Ho-ou Tribe. Attached to the Wing Pack is an unnamed round shield. Also, the pack has its own A.I.
End
Seishin
- Ika So Koku Ikki: Did some history reading. The word "ikki" seems to refer to peasant + religious groups revolting against the Shogun and daimyo forces. In an automony area, it suits, and the Iga Sokaku Ikki didn't seemed to be formed until later when Iga was invaded. I currently have it as an oligarchy-like council of 12 people. Hmm *scratches head*
- Kousaka and Tsukimori: There may have been an old time rivalry.
- Hayate Sogabe & Kyoushirou: Hayate originated from Mino Province from an infamous family. Kyoushiro doesn't like him because the family caused suffering to the Koka. I will not explain here.
- Last Names: It is mostly the case that those with surnames belong to, or once belong to, a noble family. They are "samurai-like" and are in charge of teaching the ninjutsu culture. They also respect the peasant-class like ninja as they also can take part in armed force.
- NEXT: The following events have happened: Azai attacked Takamori with Iga assistance, intruders in Iga and the "Trio" are forced to retreat. I'm taking time to find the meaning behind the attack, and the reason why Kyoushirou has decided to attack the disguised Iga? One being a monk, it could say that a rebellion was in the plan.
- Why are the Iga working with Tokugawa (during Warring States Era)? There may have been an old time rivalry.
- Hayate Sogabe & Kyoushirou: For Koka and Rokkaku, it may be both out of fear and a truce.
End
I wonder if I should take some time to meditate on how to write and organize better. Go on a hiatus and primarily focus on reading other works and various tips on literature so I can be more confident. So what's on my mind? I've gotten this far, but what is bothering me? I'll ATTEMPT to rant later. Uh-oh, rant. That can't be good. That means it will be difficult to understand.
Here's some more development notes. Remember, they are susceptible to being changed and there are typo/grammar errors present since I was in a hurry. Highlight to read:
PokéFighters Remake - Beginning Stages
- Katakana: ポケ ファイターズ
- Heroes: Pikachu and Pichu, Charizard, Gengar, Ivysaur, Golduck
- Rivals: Scyther, Hitmonchan, Hitmonlee, Aerodactyl
- Enemies: Aerodactyl, Team Rocket, Yuutarou & Tokuwaru Family
- Naming:Pokemon and humans will have various names. In the English, I think the characters have both eastern and western types.
- About New enemy Name Tokuwaru is from "legend" (説, toku) and tsutawaru (伝わる), meaning summon. These guys may summon the Legendary Birds and one of the strongest PKMN trainer families.
- Regions: Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, majority of the story will take place in Kanto-Johto joint regions.
- Demographics??: There may be far more pokemon than humans? And there's no longer human gyms?
End
Howl of Gray Wolf
After a freakin month or two I, again, take a long time just to get a single chapter done.
- Nigrum and Niger: Both means "black", but Nigrum sounded better ;) and refers to dark nature being spread when sins are commited or when there's negative influence like death. It is needed to resurrect Moo.
- Enemy: So we meet Jesvah the dragon, and the next chapter will be a fight against him.
- Gray Wolf's pack: Like in older version, I do plan on getting them killed; but unlike the older version, it may not happen in as a single chapter
- The Islands: The Chimeia (χημεία φύλα) lives here. If I recall from notes, a magician or alchemist tribe?
End
SolAka
- Situation of Shirei: Shirei Kingdoms are under the control of the Deva Dynasty. After a large battle, the heirs of the kingdom families escaped along with others and the SUJ units
- Official Shirei's Four: Here are the Four SUJ pilots, family names first:
Soratora Hiori (空途駕 火折) : Phoenix
Gentekki Igiyuki (玄哲気 威儀幸) : Tortosie
Yuutsukasa Torahiko (勇士 児彦) : White Tiger
Seiji Ryoya The 3rd (青史 竜矢3世) : Dragon
- The Invasion fights: Yami vs Hiori will be first, in Tokyo Japan. Then it'll be Indra vs Torahiko + (later) Hiori
- SUJ meaning: SUj is a machine designation, meaning Shirei Ue Jyujin. It stands for Shirei Superiro Beast God, referring to the four Beast mecha. One of them is SolAka.
- More SolAka Armaments: SolAka's wings have bendable alloy to give it a realistic effect when the mecha's in flight. The only idea I could think of to attach the wings was to make it like an "attachment pack". This makes it a little heavier, but making SolAka an effective and symbolic mecha was the motiv for the Ho-ou Tribe. Attached to the Wing Pack is an unnamed round shield. Also, the pack has its own A.I.
End
Seishin
- Ika So Koku Ikki: Did some history reading. The word "ikki" seems to refer to peasant + religious groups revolting against the Shogun and daimyo forces. In an automony area, it suits, and the Iga Sokaku Ikki didn't seemed to be formed until later when Iga was invaded. I currently have it as an oligarchy-like council of 12 people. Hmm *scratches head*
- Kousaka and Tsukimori: There may have been an old time rivalry.
- Hayate Sogabe & Kyoushirou: Hayate originated from Mino Province from an infamous family. Kyoushiro doesn't like him because the family caused suffering to the Koka. I will not explain here.
- Last Names: It is mostly the case that those with surnames belong to, or once belong to, a noble family. They are "samurai-like" and are in charge of teaching the ninjutsu culture. They also respect the peasant-class like ninja as they also can take part in armed force.
- NEXT: The following events have happened: Azai attacked Takamori with Iga assistance, intruders in Iga and the "Trio" are forced to retreat. I'm taking time to find the meaning behind the attack, and the reason why Kyoushirou has decided to attack the disguised Iga? One being a monk, it could say that a rebellion was in the plan.
- Why are the Iga working with Tokugawa (during Warring States Era)? There may have been an old time rivalry.
- Hayate Sogabe & Kyoushirou: For Koka and Rokkaku, it may be both out of fear and a truce.
End
