Refresh: when I return

I was going to work on the new chapter of "HoGW" yesterday but I lost confidence. I was mostly away/busy during the afternoon. I was on the first sentence, and then I just gave up. Like, "no, I don't like this." I feel disappointed. I was also trying to describe "Pangaea" in 2-3 sentences but didn't like the flow of my typing.

It will probably take me years of practice to fix up my grammar and renew my style. I wish I could refurbish my writing while having a firm understanding of correct grammar and word choice, but grammar seems so massive. My memory seems terrible. Where should I start? And how will I remember? Because I've been writing redundantly for so long, will I be able to point it out?

Here's some thing that I should look into

Clause
Modifier
Mood
Noun / Abstract Noun / Concrete noun
Person
Phrase
Preposition
Personal pronoun
Pronoun
Sentence
Singular & Plural
Tense
Verb
Voice

I'll be away this weekend, starting Friday

The Coward: Shoutarou

COWARDICE
"Lack of courage to face danger, difficulty, opposition, pain, etc."

This is a Seishin-related entry.

What makes cowardly characters? I portray Shoutarou is this way, or at least try to, but it seems unreasonable because he is a family heir. Or is it? Why do I think that way? In Feudal Japan, what kind of reason would make a man cowardly?

Here's something I am thinking over, and trying to find topics about on the internet.

My tweets

• Thu, 11:41: Refresh: when I return http://t.co/sSBIW7ZW
• Thu, 11:47: The Coward: Shoutarou http://t.co/cYezg00K