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mastergraywolf) wrote2012-07-11 08:23 pm
mastergraywolf) wrote2012-07-11 08:23 pm
STATUS: of other drafts
Seishin Series: This is quite strange but instead of working on the Sasuke draft, I keep thinking up other ideas (tiny ones, but they're something). I just have this determination to show off other characters AND to create more stories since this is a series with MOSTLY short stories. It just disappoints me that I have little to show, and that I have few ideas. Can I write a Japanese story? I'm still anxious about that.
The death of Kyoushirou's parents is still a mystery. But I made an interesting background on the father of Ryo and Hajime.
Do I digress? The Sasuke draft is mostly done. It looks nice. It's a character intro story.
SolAka: ...I enjoy this story, but I fear for the future when it starts getting intense. I am still uncertain of the direction and I just feel that things won't look right. Such as Yang's plan and another dark secret. Since this is just the beginning, I probably should focus on showing off Solaka. I still concerned about how Yang plans to dominate Earth. Seems difficult to figure out what you'd do when your home planet's dying.
United We Soar: The last chapters (fight scenes) and the super-craft's design are my largest concerns. For example, for the latter, am I knowledgeable about how a aircraft works
Stalwart: Draft of next chapter looks good. But because it's short, will it have a good impact? It's basically a light love story.
The death of Kyoushirou's parents is still a mystery. But I made an interesting background on the father of Ryo and Hajime.
Do I digress? The Sasuke draft is mostly done. It looks nice. It's a character intro story.
SolAka: ...I enjoy this story, but I fear for the future when it starts getting intense. I am still uncertain of the direction and I just feel that things won't look right. Such as Yang's plan and another dark secret. Since this is just the beginning, I probably should focus on showing off Solaka. I still concerned about how Yang plans to dominate Earth. Seems difficult to figure out what you'd do when your home planet's dying.
United We Soar: The last chapters (fight scenes) and the super-craft's design are my largest concerns. For example, for the latter, am I knowledgeable about how a aircraft works
Stalwart: Draft of next chapter looks good. But because it's short, will it have a good impact? It's basically a light love story.